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Shel Silverstein

Sultan of Spoonerisms

By Gabrielle Copeland Schoeffield

I recently had cause to read two more of Shel Silverstein’s children’s books (I have been slowly going through his entire collection). I found Runny Babbit and Runny Babbit Returns delightful, nonsensical, and thought-provoking. Both books are written using a literary device called a spoonerism.


According to the Meriam Webster dictionary, a spoonerism is defined as “a transposition of usually initial sounds of two or more words (as in tons of soil for sons of toil).”
As the story goes, Reverend William Archibald Spooner, a clergyman and educator in Britain was nervous when it came to public speaking. He often twisted up the words as they fell from his mouth. As a result, things like ‘a crushing blow’ came out as ‘a blushing crow.’ Soon enough his name inspired the term which is still used today.

Each book, a collection of Shel Silverstein poems, accompanied by Silverstein artwork, are written in the spoonerism fashion. The first poem in Runny Babbit gives the simplest of explanations. “…instead of saying “purple hat,” they all say “hurple pat…”

My favorite is BEDDY TEAR STETS GUCK.
Runny Babbit went to see
His good friend Beddy Tear,
Who had some nice heet swoney
That she was glad to share.
They slobbled it and gurped it—
It gluck to them like stue.
Said Beddy Tear to Runny,
“I think I’m thuck on you.”

Other examples of spoonerisms include a well-boiled icicle rather than a well-oiled bicycle, Its roaring pain instead of its pouring rain, or I bit my hunny phone instead of I hit my funny bone.
Let’s have some fun! Can you figure out what the spoonerisms below are?

Kugs and Hisses       Gocks and Saloshes       Cat and Hoat

How many can you come up with?

 

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The Wonder of the Littles, a Board Book Series

Hello Everyone!

Welcome to our February 2020 blog post! We have such a special treat today! I have always wondered how authors of board books create their craft with such limited space and word count. I am excited to present author Julie Abery to you and her wonderful strategies for writing and showing in her books. Her adorable series, entitled Little Animal Friends, is precious in the hands of readers at every age level.

TS: Hi Julie, Congratulations on your upcoming releases this month with Amicus Ink. Thank you for spending time today sharing your new board books and the process you use to create them.

JA: Thank you for having me on your blog today. I am thrilled to share a little about the Little Animal Friends board book series with you. The next two Littles, Little Hippo and Little Monkey, illustrated by Suzie Mason and published by Amicus Ink launch in a few short weeks, 25 February 2020.

TS: Whether drafting or revising, how do you know when it is necessary to show action, scene and sensory elements.

JA: My first board book, Little Tiger, started life as a list of tigerish vocabulary. When I sat down to write a story for Vivian Kirkfield’s 50 Precious Words contest in 2016 (www.viviankirkfield.com), this is what I saw:

Paper Tiger

roaring/stomping

stalk

pounce/play

jump

hunt

chuffing

growling/prowling

grrrrr

Don’t you love ‘chuffing’ – it’s a snorting sound that tigers make! Sadly, it didn’t make the final story, but what I saw in this list was lots of action, visual, and sensory words. Paper Tiger became Little Tiger and the -ing verbs became rhyming lines two and three of my quatrains.

Little Tiger

prowling,

growling,

on the jungle floor.

Each book is based on the principle that baby animals act just like our human little ones – all about action and exploring, and sometimes overstepping the line, so these action words are key!

The books have a consistent structure, but each animal has its own adventure. They have a maximum of 80 words over the 10 spreads. The first line of each quatrain is fixed, Little Tiger, Little Panda, Little Hippo, Little Monkey etc. Then each spread follows a similar pattern with the problem climax on spread 6 and Mama to the rescue on spread 7. I know that generally we aim for the protagonist to solve their own problem, but I felt that as young animals and children grow, they need a helping hand from time to time.

 TS: This is really fascinating. We read board books often yet I do not think we are fully aware of the structure. Are there specific strategies, tools or resources you use to incorporate more showing/descriptive language?

JA: I research each animal before I begin, maybe in the library or online. I also try and find animals from different environments to change the kind of action verbs needed too, and where possible I look for animal specific vocabulary to make my text as authentic as possible. I can often be found with rhymezone.com open on my computer when writing, both as a thesaurus and a rhyming dictionary.

TS: That is definitely a great resource. Would you like to share an example of before and after where you needed to show more and found the right words to paint the image for the reader?

JA: Absolutely! Little Hippo meets an Oxpecker in his search for a playmate. In real life hippos and oxpeckers have a symbiotic relationship, so this felt like a good match. Spread 3 started life as

Little Hippo

puzzling,

nuzzling,

finds a playful bird….TELLING

So I changed it too…

Little Hippo

puzzling,

nuzzling

finds a red-billed bird…

…much more visual and lovely alliteration. ‘Red-billed bird’ rolls off the tongue, sounds great and describes an Oxpecker beautifully.

TS: You work through this with such preciseness and clarity. What a challenge. Writing is about balance. How do you know you’ve got it just right? What tips or suggestions do you have for writers in terms of striving for that balance of showing versus telling?

JA: This is a tricky question. You can never be certain that you have everything right, after all editors often ask for revisions. However, with the Littles I know I have a pretty good balance when each stanza moves the story along, the rhyme and rhythm flow fluidly, and the words leave lots of room for the illustrator.

TS: Thank you very much for sharing your gift of words, and I know I for one am excited to try this type of writing. Wishing you every success with the adorable Littles!

Check out Julie’s bio, social media, and find her books on Amazon and Barnes and Noble.

Julie Author Bio:

Julie Abery is a children’s author and former Pre-K teacher. Originally from England, she has spent half of her life living in Europe, bringing up her three (now grown up) children and experiencing new languages and cultures. She now calls Switzerland home.

Julie’s debut board books Little Tiger and Little Panda illustrated by Suzie Mason, published in March 2019 with Amicus Ink. Little Hippo and Little Monkey joined the Little Animal Friends series in February 2020; a nonfiction picture book biography entitled Yusra Swims, Creative Editions, illustrated by Sally Deng in February 2020; a true story THE OLD MAN AND THE PENGUIN, Kids Can Press (Fall 2020) and nonfiction picture book bio SAKAMOTO AND THE SUGAR-DITCH KIDS, Kids Can Press (Spring 2021).

Julie is represented by Essie White of Storm Literary Agency.

Where to find Julie:

Website: https://littleredstoryshed.wordpress.com/

Twitter: @juliedawnabery

Facebook: julieabery

Instagram: juliedawnabery

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Jubilee and Creativity

Hi, Wonder of Words readers! Today’s guest on our Finding Creativity focused post is Alabama author, Karyn Tunks. I’ve been lucky enough to meet her in person a few times and she is one of those helpful, encouraging writers who makes the kidlit world the awesome place it is. I first met her when her picture book, JUBILEE, released.

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Metro-Mobile Literacy Council’s Young Authors’ Conference

A jubilee is a fascinating, rare phenomenon that occurs when a perfect condition of low oxygenated water drives millions of flounder, crabs, etc to the surface, ripe for the picking. You definitely need to check out her book to find out more. Welcome, Karyn!

Karyn: Thanks for the opportunity to be interviewed for your blog. It was fun to reflect! The photos were taken when the illustrator, Julie Buckner, was visiting Fairhope to plan out her illustrations and there was a jubilee! We tell the story about it on my website: http://www.karyntunks.com/jubilee.html

Candice: That is so neat y’all were able to experience a jubilee on her visit. What are the odds?! Where did you get the inspiration for JUBILEE?

KWT: I have always loved picture books and loved writing but it was never my intention to actually write a book for children! The inspiration for JUBILEE was a newspaper article about this rare occurrence that happens along the Eastern Shore of Mobile Bay. I became so fascinated by it that I began doing research and asking people I met from the area if they had ever experienced a jubilee. The array of stories told by people who grew up along the bay were fascinating. I was reflecting on what I had learned and the stories told to me and POP-the idea came to mind that it would make a great story!

CMC: The POP of an idea is the best. What is your favorite part of the creative process?

KWT: I really enjoy all aspects of the writing process (except for detailed editing). Coming up with ideas has never been a problem. I keep a notebook and jot down ideas for stories, interesting character traits, possible character names, and even overheard conversations that intrigue me or make me laugh. Building the basic premise for a story is always exciting because the possibilities are endless. I also like working out problems such as which direction to take a story or character. This is why I tell people that I do much of my “writing” when I’m out running. It’s a time when I can let my mind wander and that’s when the creativity really happens.

CMC: Great idea on keeping a notebook handy. It’s amazing what a wandering mind can come up with. Do you have other creative outlets or hobbies? If so, do they ever cross into your writing?

KWT: For writers, just about everything we do has potential to find its way into our stories. I enjoy volunteering for issues that are personally important to me. In the summer, I volunteer for Share the Beach, a sea turtle preservation program along the Alabama Gulf Coast. On my early morning patrols looking for turtle tracks, I pick up trash left behind by visitors to our beaches. The amount of trash is staggering! I started out wanting to write about sea turtles but instead I am working on a middle grade novel about trash!

CMC: I cannot wait to read it! The kids and I love volunteering with the Alabama Coastal Cleanup each fall. Do you have any tips you’d like to share about finding creativity?

KWT: Donald Graves, a teacher of writing, reminds us to constantly be on the lookout for ideas. Like artists, inspiration for writers can come from anywhere at anytime. That’s why keeping notes of random occurrences that catch your attention is so important. Plus, the more creative ideas collected, the more you have to choose from when the urge to write hits.

CMC: Great tip. Creativity seems to inspire more creativity. Do you have another book project you’re working on that you could give us a hint about?

KWT: I am always working on another book! My next picture book will be out in Spring 2020. It is a picture book biography about the blind artist, Ricky Trione. It was a challenge to figure out the best way to tell his story but after several weeks and many attempts it all came together on my daily run. I couldn’t get home fast enough to put it on paper. I have another picture book manuscript out for review and two middle grade novels that are at different points of completion. I have far more ideas for stories than I have time to write them!

CMC: Exciting stuff! Good luck and thanks so much for being here today. Y’all check out her website at www.karyntunks.com to see where she’ll be reading and signing next, ordering information, and teaching guides.

Tunks author photoKaryn W. Tunks is Professor of Education at the University of South Alabama. She has more than 30 years of experience teaching learners at every level from preschool through graduate school. Karyn shares her love of children’s literature by writing picture books about her adopted home state of Alabama. Titles include: JUBILEE! (2012), USS ALABAMA: Hooray for the Mighty A! (2015), and Mardi Gras in Alabama! (2019). Her next picture book about the life of Ricky Trione will be released in Spring 2020.

For your Call to Creativity exercise, peruse the paper or news media sites to spark ideas. Do you carry a notebook to jot down things that catch your attention? Now is the time to start if you don’t! Comment with something that sparks inspiration in you, or a picture of your creativity-catching notebook, and one random commenter will receive a picture book critique from me.

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Marigolds and Miracles

Before deciding what topic to choose for my blog post, I reviewed a list of literary devices, where I stumbled on the word malapropisms. I was immediately intrigued.
According to the Miriam Webster dictionary, a malapropism is “the usually unintentionally humorous misuse or distortion of a word or phrase… the use of a word sounding somewhat like the one intended but ludicrously wrong in the context.”

A little research uncovered incidents throughout history, where people used malapropisms unintentionally (or intentionally) in fine literature including the character Dogberry in Shakespeare’s Much Ado About Nothing, and The Merchant of Venice (also by Shakespeare).

Malapropisms aren’t limited to literature. Stan Laurel (of Laurel and Hardy fame) used malapropisms extensively as did comedian Ronnie Barker. The use of malapropisms is what in part makes comedians so funny. I was tickled to find Mary Tyler Moore used them on several occasions when she portrayed Laura Petry on the Dick Van Dyke Show back in the sixties.
But where did the word actually come from? Richard Sheridan’s play, THE RIVALS is littered with the misuse or distortion of words and phrases, although I am sure Sheridan used them intentionally to create humor.


One particularly delightful character in the play, Mrs. Malaprop, frequently uses the wrong word when trying to make her point. Soon after, someone coined the word malapropisms.

This discovery of course, made me smile, as it illicited a memory of a dear friend I had growing up. A dinner table debate caused my friend, who resented one remark in particular, to blurt out, “I resemble that remark,” which only gave further cause for everyone at the table to laugh. When he realized his blunder, he chuckled along with the rest of us. Forever after, it was a joke between us.
Youngsters seem to have a handle on malapropisms without even realizing they do. They can make you laugh until you cry without even trying.
My youngest easily has the market cornered on malapropisms. She is forever coming up with them. My favorite malapropism came from her as we walked through the home and garden section at the local home Improvement store.
With great excitement she shouted, “Mom, Look at all the miracles!”
Yes, she really is my blessing, my marigold!

 

 

For details about malapropisms check out this website: https://literarydevices.net/malapropism/.

If you fancy learning more about Mrs. Malaprop check out this post by Wad Bradford on ThoughtCo  https://www.thoughtco.com/mrs-malaprop-and-origin-of-malapropisms-3973512

 

 

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It’s A Blog & Book Birthday!

Happy birthday to the Wonder of Words blog! Today marks our one year anniversary and we couldn’t have done it without our readers and our awesome guests. So, thank you all! Happy birthday Wonder of Words!

Speaking of awesome guests, today’s blog post is about a story I first read on a twitter pitch event. As soon as I read Amanda Jackson’s query and first lines, I knew this would be a real-live book one day.
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Welcome to the Wonder of Words, Amanda! I’m so glad we connected during Study Hall and in the debut group, New in Nineteen. I’m excited about your beautiful and important book coming out. When and where did you get the inspiration for your square-who-wants-to-roll-like-a-circle story?

It was late 2016, during the one year my husband and I lived in Northern California. We moved there for his job, and the circumstances were such that I didn’t work. That gave me the time and brain-space to discover my love of writing for kids. So, that’s actually when I started writing picture book stories altogether. That’s one reason I will always be thankful for that crazy year.

I have a deep hope for a more inclusive and understanding society. That hope was what inspired this story. Sam is for anyone who feels they don’t fit, in whatever way.

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Such a beautiful hope and your book captures that sentiment perfectly. I love it. And it’s amazing what we can accomplish when we have the brain-space! What is your favorite part of the creative process?

I have two favorites:
– Inspiration. Who doesn’t love being inspired?? There’s nothing like discovering a new idea for a new story. It feels like falling in love.
– Revision. After the initial excitement of inspiration, drafting the story can feel like slogging through mud. But once I get it on the page, and it has every element it needs, I love all the little challenges that come with smoothing it out and making it shine.

Falling in inspiration is the best. Do you have other creative outlets or hobbies? Do they ever cross into your writing?

I do! I enjoy cooking, crocheting, and crafting. I haven’t seen them cross into my writing yet, but they do play an important role. Sometimes my writing muscles need a break, and they offer other creative options.

Love the alliteration, Amanda 😉 Do you have any tips about finding creativity?

My best tip would be to try to pay attention. Because I really think creative inspiration is all around us, and it’s more a matter of recognizing it. I do my best to be aware of the moments I feel that creative spark—moments that makes me laugh, curious, explore, cry, ask questions, get angry. Those are usually the moments that hold that starts to stories.

The act of paying attention is so important. Creativity usually seems to inspire more creativity. Do you have another book project you’re working on that you could give us a hint about?

Sure! When I began writing, I naturally gravitated toward more serious stories. Lately I’ve been playing with punchier, sillier stories that make me laugh as I write them. Such a fun change of pace!

I love silly stories, can’t wait to read ‘em! Thanks so much for being here, Amanda. I have My Shape is Sam preordered and am looking forward to Sam rolling in! wowaj2

Blurb: “In this debut picture book, Sam is a square who lives in a world where everyone has a job to do, depending on their shape. But Sam doesn’t want to stack like the other squares…

He wants to roll like a circle!”

Published by Page Street Kids, wonderful illustrations by Lydia Nichols

Here’s the link to her author website where you can preorder My Shape is Sam, out September 17th: www.AmandaJacksonBooks.com

What is a hope you harbor that could inspire others? Comment by Sept 13th with yours, or mention your latest picture book work-in-progress, and as a special birthday gift to our readers, one lucky random comment will be chosen to get a critique not just from me, but from the whole Wonder of Words team!

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Words Matter

“We speak, we write, we do language. That is how civilizations heal.” Toni Morrison

As readers, we are drawn to words. Over the years I have been drawn to Michener, Uris, Tolkien, Barbara Kingsolver and Barbara Ehrenreich. As a youngster in Poland, I was raised on the works of Janusz Korczak, the poetry of Jan Brzechwa, Maria Konopnicka and (in translation from Spanish) Monro Leaf’s The Story of Ferdinand. After we arrived in the United States, I read Rudyard Kipling’s Jungle Books, Hugh Lofting’s Dr. Dolittle stories and Maguerite de Angeli’s Door in the Wall. And of course, there were all the classics – the Brothers’ Grimm, Johanna Spyri, Jules Verne, Charles Dickens. Who are some of your favorite authors?

As writers, we know words matter. I often say, “Words are my world”.  “In the beginning was the word.” We paint the world through words. We develop characters and plot with words.

As parents and teachers, we teach children to use words wisely.

This is increasingly important when our country’s leaders use derogatory, negative, foul language and resort to name-calling. As someone who was called names, tormented and bullied due to cultural and neurological differences, I’m sensitive to this type of language.

What message does it teach our children? How should we respond?

I suggest we respond with love by teaching kindness. Being kind can make a huge difference in someone’s life.

Some books that teach the importance of our words, kindness and inclusivity:

The Big Umbrella words and pictures by Amy June Bates. Simon and Schuster Books for Young Readers 2018. 32 p; 89 words

There is always room for everyone under the big umbrella that loves to gather people in. This free verse, beautifully illustrated poem shares the message of inclusiveness in a fun way. Our hearts have the same capacity to expand – there is no limit to how many people we can love and include.

Be Kind by Pat Zietlow Miller ill by Jen Hill. Roaring Brook Press 2018. 32p; 400 words

Be Kind copy

When Tanisha spills grape juice all over her dress, her classmate tries to be kind. But it is not always easy. Examples of kindness include giving, helping, and paying attention. These small acts are important and build more acts of kindness.

If you plant a seed words and pictures by Kadir Nelson. Baker and Bray 2017 (an imprint of Harper Collins).

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In this short poem, we learn that the things we plant grow and grow and grow. They can be carrots or tomatoes, selfishness or kindness.

Words and Your Heart words and pictures by Kate Jane Neal. Simon & Schuster Children’s Books, 2017.

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In her debut, Kate Jane Neal explains simply and directly the power our words have. She shows how our words impact others – both for good and for evil.

Here is a poem I wrote about words:

WORDS: HANDLE WITH CARE

As children, we were told to say:

“Sticks and stones may break my bones,

but words can never hurt me.”

Yet words often cause injury and pain…

The scars don’t show,

but the wounds may never heal.

Words

 or their absence

have power:

They can hurt, or they can heal.

They can bruise, or they can mend.

They can kill – or give new life.

Words

evoke image, smell, taste, sound, mood, feel.

Words have power.

Words are real.

 

Words

tell a story,

convey a message,

convince the skeptic,

stir up mood and feelings.

Words.

Use them with care

to encourage, engage, enrich.

It is said: “The pen is mightier than the sword.”

Words

can change lives.

You

can change the world

one word at a time.

What is a quote or poem that resonates with you?

What are some of your favorite books that teach kindness?

How can your words help change our world?

Share it in the comments to pass along the power of words.

 

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Metaphors can be magical; Similes will leave you spellbound

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I don’t remember how old I was when I was first introduced to metaphors and similes in English class, but I never forgot the definition I was given for a simile. “A simile is a figure of speech comparing two unlike objects using like or as”. Maybe that was were I caught the love for words bug?
Webster’s Dictionary currently defines similes as “a figure of speech comparing two unlike things that is often introduced by like or as (as in cheeks like roses)”, while it defines a metaphor as “a figure of speech in which a word or phrase literally denoting one kind of object or idea is used in place of another to suggest a likeness or analogy between them (as in drowning in money).”
I often say to my youngest daughter “You are my Texas tornado” referring to the ramshackle state she can leave a room in a matter of minutes. That would be a metaphorical statement. The other thing I may say to her is “you go through a room like a tornado!” Again, in reference to the shape of the room when she leaves, except this time it’s a simile.
All you need to do is look around you to find similes and metaphors. They are in the songs we listen to (You are the Sunshine of My Life), the everyday expressions we use (like two peas in a pod), and the books we read. Much to my delight, there is an abundance of metaphors and similes in the picture books I’ve read, too many to list here.

Owl Moon, by Jane Yolen, has text rich in similes and metaphors. “Somewhere behind us a train whistle blew, long and low, like a sad, sad song,” is a favorite. I read this book many times as a mentor text for various manuscript ideas, but never had it felt so melodious and soothing as it was when I listened to the author read it aloud. I was completely captivated!

Other books filled with metaphors include You’re Toast (and other metaphors we adore) written by Nancy Loewen, and My School is a Zoo written by Stu Smith, just to name a few.

 

If similes are more to your liking, check out Muddy as a Duck Puddle (and other American Similes) written by Laurie Lawlor or My Heart is like a Zoo written by Michael Hall.

 

 

Can’t decide which is a favorite? Try Skin Like Milk, Hair of Silk: What are similes and metaphors, written by Brian P Cleary.